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I however have got a problem with your jumps in assumptions and one would do well to fill in those breaks. In the event you can accomplish that, I will certainly end up being impressed.
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The heart of your writing while sounding reasonable at
first, did not settle well with me after some time.
Somewhere within the sentences you were able to make me a believer but just for a very short while.
I however have got a problem with your jumps in assumptions and one
would do well to fill in those breaks. In the
event you can accomplish that, I will certainly
end up being impressed.
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